"Aman" & "Deep" are two different words in Punjabi.  "Aman" means "Peace" and "Deep" means "Source of light". Hence Amandeep means "Symbol of love and Peace."

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Who Am I?

Who am I?

a poet?

a dreamer?

a student?

a child?

a beloved?

Am i a poet?

yes i am

I am a poet,

a poet of beauty

a poet of inspiration

a poet of emotions

A poet for truth

Am i a child?

Yes, i am

I am a child of innocence

A child of purity

A child of nature

A child of my Parents

A child against Crime

Am I a dreamer?

Yes, I am

Because

I love everyone

A dreamer

wants to spread love everywhere

Wants peace

Wants "Aman" in the world

A dreamer of humanity

A dreamer for life

Am i a student?

Yes, I am

I am a student of Science

Student of this nature

Student of my faith

Student of my teacher

Student against lie

Am i beloved of someone?

hump......hope so.......heheheheh





Poetry by amandeep
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Written on 2007-07-15 at 12:56

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yeah.. by this time, you have known what you are.. isn't it? and someone else also knows..but u know the most important thing ..you yourself know now what you are..:-)
2012-07-25


Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
Could you let it stay with "I am" without any label or concept defining what you are and feel the freedom of that...
I liked your poem.
2009-11-27


Dan Cederholm
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This poem is outstanding great!
I love it . . . the words . . . the
touch of the thoughts . . .

*APPLAUSES and BOOKMARK*

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2008-10-01


Amy Valentina
To the last question:
Yes you are to all those whom you love.
Beautiful thoughts...
God bless you
2008-10-01


Amy Valentina
To the last question:
Yes you are to all those whom you love.
Beautiful thoughts...
God bless you
2008-10-01


Kathy Lockhart
Dear Aman, this is a wonderful uplifting and thoughtful poem. You are a blessing to those who have had the pleasure to know you.
kathy ji
2008-09-30


Eleanor
I really do like how you believe you can be anything
because it's true you can!
True words with meaning.
2008-09-06


Sid
It was very nice, the words coming right from you heart, but it is sad that you going...
2008-06-14


Anna N
worlds needs person like you
like it alot
2007-12-18


Joe Fern
man, you just nailed me here. i mean you just summarized me!
heh, especially your last two lines...we can always hope...
2007-08-09


M Heathcote
wants to spread love everywhere

That is a very noble wish!
2007-08-05


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
You are you , all that you ask , you are , and yet more you are , as a child we ask Why? a questan we as adults should learn again to ask Why? , always be who , and what you are all ways qustaning , asking why? then may be we will all live in pease , understanding , acceptant of others as they are .

Well writ , Amandeep.Amen

Ken ( D Williams)
2007-07-15


Adeleine
Dear amandeep

This is a very nice and deep poem for a teenager...
You really have a deep heart - to write this.

I am so glad that you can see yourself in all that your are writing, it really makes me smile.....

Take care dear - and keep on
2007-07-15