Thanks to "Stan Cooper" for suggesting the title of this poem. :)


Longing

You are the one,
I yearned for,
The one I dreamed of,
In my words ,
In my prayers,
Why your name was present always?
Why Angels come in night and say
"She will be of yours one day "
Why I miss you , and count the leaves,
Why I look so steadily to nothing
Why I keep thinking and sit blank (but lost)
So much , but words are silent
Don't say, but so much to say
Why I stop, Why I laugh,
Why I close my eyes
Just to feel you ,
just to walk with you
just to laugh with you
But I know You are an illusion
But still I dance with you.



Poetry by amandeep
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Written on 2010-11-23 at 13:47

Tags Sad  Love  Broken 

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Neelima
Letting go of someone is very difficult. Turn your mind towards arts, start painting it really takes long time, and can fill in the emptiness....
2011-09-17


-YeNuShA-
i love how this poem flows..i relate to it
2011-06-27


Kshiti Dubey
A very nice one indeed amandeep. And I agree with StanCooper that "Longing" would be a very apt title
2011-04-23



heart touching ..Amandeep .. loved your poems :) keep smiling .. keep writing .. :)

With love and best regards .. Parminder .. :)
2011-04-07


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
enjoyed poem

You asked for a suggested title...

How about "Longing"

Stan
2011-03-13


White
Marvelous...loved it
2011-03-05


Yeshi Paljor
I am sure this will be a reaility!
2011-02-26



A bit sad but with hope.
2011-02-19


zaipoems
loved your poem here amandeep
long time...

Happy New Year in advance....
2010-12-31