THEAR WAS A TIME

Thea was a time as I reached the age of eleven

I thort we could change the world , take up

the struggle , banners to , of perants , grand perants

finsh what they had began , how wrong we all were

they and us

for now we have gone back to the times of then

now all what was gainde taken back by those who

rule , I do not mean the politician , for they

enspite of what they think are not the holders of the

rains of power , meaerly the fases , power is held

by those with no fases , nor name

''THEY dictaite wars , the ecomaney , poverty ,

we pay the price.

Ken D Williams.

The Dyslexic Wordsmith Ov Thanet





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Written on 2007-08-11 at 21:57

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Yes, I agree with fiine. This is chilling. The thoughts and imagery here involving They, the faceless entities holding all of the power, bring this together to an almost hopeless darkness.
2013-10-30


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
interesting thoughts spring into mind with your text... i read into this that politicians are just the puppets of unseen masters (so to speak) just so that the public have something to view, keeping them safely in the shadows... the feelings of disillusionment and premonitory awareness something is very wrong come through for me... gives the impression the author wants to bring to attention the reality of the unseen... chilling thoughts to ponder, so your text is very effective... well done.... :f *hugs* xx
2007-08-12