scared

I don't know if it's her or me that screams
because I'm getting numbed
when the whisperings inside me
embeds every sense of me

With scared eyes
I look at her
did you scream?
or was it I?
press my ribs close
around my chest
so that you
can't see
what belongs too you
inside me

good or bad
I hide it well
or not
did you scream?

Why?




Poetry by samot
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Written on 2005-05-26 at 16:55

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chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
from screams to quiet calm, fear hides. good piece.
2005-07-02


Lord DarkRaven
I liked the end.
Hiding things are necessary at times.
2005-05-26


MadinSane
i like this one. especially 'press my ribs close
around my chest
so that you
can't see
what belongs too you
inside me'

but i think that the 'why' in the end is unnecessary.
2005-05-26