There are cracks in the walls we have laid


fall from grace

I say we need to talk
and you walk
you cover your hands with chalk
but I know
you have to let go
we all lose face
in our fall from grace.



Poetry by Pokershark
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Written on 2009-01-15 at 19:50

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Powerful messages there within the lines, both individually and together...
Loved the brevity and zippy succinctness of this poem.
2009-11-18


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
Excellent rhythm
in this heart
grabbing poem

I really like
your style :)

~L.~
2009-04-17


gemma
this is wonderful, and i hope you didn't fall too far.

x
2009-02-27


Dee Daffodil
It is an understanding soul who wrote this poem. Lovely work !
Hugs,
Dee
2009-01-15



well written and so true, there is always a grace remedy.
2009-01-15