Crook Faux Demise


Intrigue drips like an elegant sauterne
From her cool amethyst eyes
Flashing like moonlight gems a burn
Radiating a ghostly pallor guise

A whoosh is heard from a midnight wind
Rustling the summer wheat ready to thresh
As if a specter is trying to escape the sin
Of a maul swinging death

She is gone in an instant
Graft hued apparition
Fleeing the crook ascent
Of the reaper's scythe intent




Poetry by Kee Zealy The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-03-10 at 15:03

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Brian Oarr
The whole of this piece is a unique metaphor. I like how you work in the wheat ready to thresh. Nicely written.
2009-03-10