Babble

The stream flows as
She dabbles her fingers
Into the babbling waters.
It bubbles all around her.

Later all is stagnant.
She withdraws her fingers
Knowing the terra firma as
She delves into the rivers
Of dreams.




Poetry by jenks The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-03-24 at 03:56

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Bjarne Nordbö
I like.
2009-04-02


Sid Gardner
Good write Linda.
Sidxx
2009-03-29


Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
Wow! This says "mystical" to me.
2009-03-25


Rob Graber
A lovely little piece indeed.
2009-03-24


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Babble on, Jenks...good poem

Stan
2009-03-24


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
those metaphoric babbling waters - our life bubbles coming to the surface

Elle x
2009-03-24



I really like the dabble-babbling-bubble sequence. It's much more interesting and satisfying than straight rhyme.
2009-03-24