Different angles.


[Different angels.]


when she walks

when she walks
her timid cautious motions strike
protectiveness into the soul

you want to help her
to take her arm and
walk with her

her hair is a work of red-gold wonder
her smile is sweet and uncertain
yet also brimming with mischievous fun

if only the distance could be bridged
if through the silence and the awkwardness
a shimmering bond could be formed

what a union that would be
earth and air and fire and water
all together as one

beauty and grace would reign
rhyme and reason together
sweetness and serenity and song

but until that glorious day
until interest overcomes shy smiles
you'll just have to admire her from afar



Words by Sun.Moon.Stars.Rain
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Written on 2009-10-26 at 01:59

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Made it
all the way
to my wall
-Can't applaud u enuff
2009-11-10


Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
Very beautiful!
2009-11-09


binesh
Really beatiful Lines...A Good poem indeed
2009-10-29


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2009-10-28


Esti D-G
Lovely!
luvestix
2009-10-27


CC
truly beautiful work. so rich in contrast, i find myself reading it over and over again
2009-10-27


bluebackpack
I must have read this five or so times. Beautiful.
2009-10-26


Baskenmütze
I can't read the title without seeing "Where'er she walks"...=)
this is lovely and sweet and touching and superbly well-written
yay!
2009-10-26


Bjanka
...greatly descibed, beautiful end...
2009-10-26



just take her hand and all shyness will disappear on her wings, you two will fly...

Lovely work to send me to a different angle of dreamescape

Smiling at you

Tai
2009-10-26