Inspired by and dedicated to a love that should be celebrated. =)

(Re: Second to last line: The rhythm is off...trust me, I know...I've been fussing with it for ages and can't get it to work. Oh well.)



Virgo and Capricorn

The stars above their births were kind
And made them strong of heart and mind
The constellations smiled down
Made each the sweetest boy around
Though each lived in a separate world
Their destiny was soon unfurled
Divined from harmony above
Their stars declared they'd fall in love

And Virgo grew up fine and tall
Into a man beloved by all
However, something wasn't right...
Somehow he felt alone at night
Then suddenly he found his heart
That star-blessed romance now could start
For Capricorn had also grown
And brimmed with glory seldom known

And then without a backward glance
They fell together in a trance
Into a world built just for them
By stars and loving seraphim
And anyone could plainly see
How much those two were meant to be
For Virgo, life shone bright and clear
When Capricorn just held him near

And now when countless time has passed
There is no doubt those two will last
Such sweetness one can rarely find
It warms the heart and soothes the mind
No one can touch the dreams they share
Their love remains beyond compare
Destined from the time they were born:
Sweet Virgo and his Capricorn




Poetry by Sun.Moon.Stars.Rain
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Written on 2009-07-19 at 03:48

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liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
I think it's perfect

~L.~
2009-11-04


Kaede
much smileyness =) =) =)
2009-07-21


Nick Matherne
this made me tear up a bit
SO beautiful
I love this
THANK YOU SO MUCH!
This is awesome.
I really am having a hard time commenting
but AAAAHHHHH
Thank you!
2009-07-20


Black Knight
It's very well written. Fine.
2009-07-19