I stirred my sugar in my coffee
too hard - I created a whirlpool
where I saw the bottom of my cup
and that inspired this poem.

~L.~


Generally Following




A vortex of stirred-up emotions
whirlpools around my shattered heart,
yet even after the surface is settled
my soul is still split apart.

I do not know why it happened
I am not sure when it began,
but someone that, with-my-life, I trusted
turned out to be a devious man.

So all the time I am in a mess
now constantly teary and sad,
but I know that things will get better
GOOD, in life, always generally follows the bad.

09/06/09



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-06-09 at 06:38

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melanie sue
I like the way you have expressed heartbreak in your poem. I like your spirit. You will get through it.
2009-06-09


NicholasG
I hope it does for you!!
A good and uplifting viewpoint, well written.
Nick
2009-06-09