TIME WILL TELL!

Time will tell , who was right ,

Who was wrong , you or me ,

Who was true ,

Who were the fake ,

You saw in me an opportunity ,

In you I mistaken saw a friend ,

Big mistake ,

Time will tell who lost the most.


The Dyslexic Poet Ken D Williams







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Written on 2009-07-08 at 17:36

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Rob Graber
Straight to the point. Line 6 I find oddly appealing. The prestige dialect would seem to call for "mistakenly," or commas setting off "mistaken"; but it seems somehow exactly right as it is.
2009-07-08