Obsidian


Piece of obsidian
Forged Volcanic child
Nonpareil

Razor Clinical instrument
Disguised behind her smile
Mirrored brown gemstone eyes

Arrowhead direct
Pyrogenic as volcanic creation
Yet clinical cool

Obsidian smooth
Product of past eruptions
Noticeabley absent

Her macuahuitl is sheathed
Edges smoothed
as Obsidian




Poetry by Kee Zealy The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-07-29 at 04:01

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Achernar
whoa, a most potent and extended metaphor... this is by no means an easy thing to bring off! Very excellent write, wonderful!!!
2009-08-10