My first attempt at Haiku...also a double acrostic! Constructive feedback welcome :)


Hearts

Hearts break, recover
Endlessly searching with want
Awareness, love is



Haiku by Bella738
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Written on 2009-09-13 at 07:09

Tags Haiku  Hearts  Love 

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ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Hope with in the mind , can stop the hart from breaking apart.
Ken D
2015-04-29


France England
Well done as I was left feeling two for tea warm and cozy. Oh what a wonderful expression in so few words. Your first attempt? May I say it is great.
2013-01-25



ahh,,soulsearch is a wonderous adventure,what emerges from the deepest corners of one soul..as the heart has many valves that open and close with every beat we take for granted and that is love! sometimes I wonder about feeling and emotion and go what the...? nicely written!!

cyndi
2009-09-13