a poem that grips at the centre of the soul
2006-02-18

Zoya Zaidi
Wow upon wow, Ricky darling!
This one fisrt goes to my list of bookmarks, then only I pick up the pen (keys rather) to comment!

Very powerful and profound!
It has a certain effect on me I FIND HARD TO DESCRIBE!
As if someone is renting my heart open,
As if someone is pleading with the wind,
As if some one is whispering hoarse near me,
As if someone is crying close to me,
As if some one is shouting "Halleluiah!"
As if some one is prostrating in front of Thee!
As if someone is my brother own,
As if some one has the pain that is my own,
As if someone has a soul like mine,
As if some one has a heart that is mine,
This is what I feel when I read your poem,
This is what my heart cries,
Rik, dear friend of mine!

(((((hugs)))))
Love, xxx, Zoya

Oooops! it has a become a poem, I posting it on my page for you Rik! Ok?

(((((hugs))))
Love, Zoya
2006-02-18

Thomas Selnes
I feel that I have some kind of understanding when it comes to many of your texts. I've written things with a likeness in tone so many times. It's really great to see ones own thoughts put into words by gifted writers.
2006-02-18

lastromantichero
well done with this very deep poem
there comes a time in every ones life whenthe crying has to stop very powerful and moving rgds mike
2006-02-18