A quantum theory of everything :-)




Entangled...

by a never ending waltz

of every moment that has or will ever occur
we become touched by and are touching

every thought and every dream

that has rallied against the force of time. 
 
Entwined, embraced and emboldened

by an infinite arrangement of possibility

the mind does not still

even with the knowing

that every footstep

placed on every path

may have been placed there before.

 

So once again with innocence in hand

the mind sets sail from the edge of exisitence

to venutre into the chaos of our dreams

to steer us through a life of deja vu

in a vain attempt to navigate our soul

to a different shore.

 





Poetry by Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2010-10-07 at 17:08

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Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Hi Rik...your poem give credence to Yogi Berras famous
philosophic comment, "Its Deja vu all over again"

Thanks for the very interesting poem

Stan
2010-10-16


learnings
Sums up the entire pattern of human existence quite nicely.
Very well written.
2010-10-11


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
mais oui, bien sūr... ;)

My thoughts currently feel entangled trying to piece it together... warning sirens are going off, flashing red letters (as though they were blinking on a screen) announcing that all systems are on : "Overload". You know me and my incredibly scientific mind :p

It made me think of when you're in a moment and you don't know if it's part of a dream or if it's part of a time you were awake when something happened. Why I got that feeling though I couldn't explain really. :)
2010-10-08



...and our final destination shall be worth all that we had to encounter to reach love's perfection; that shoe fitting like a glove!
Well Rik this is a masterpiece! From the opening line to the final letter you held me in awe. THis IS perfection second to none.
2010-10-07