Stars

We come together
From stars...with
Forearms as long
As feet.

That is delicious somehow...
And stars are ever so sparkly!



Poetry by jenks The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2010-11-11 at 04:02

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
I like the foot and forearm length reference here - it's a funny fact about the human body's proportions and to be described that way is even funnier in my mind - I picture aliens trying to get a mental picture of such a creature lol Sorry, I haven't slept much :) Enjoyed this, of course :) xx
2010-11-11


Rob Graber
I am perplexed by the anatomy, but I love the finale!
2010-11-11


John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
So few words with such desire. A lovely poem.
2010-11-11


Brian Oarr
All that is has been fashioned in the stars. And that includes poetry, Linda.

"We are stardust
Billion year old carbon
We are golden
Caught in the devils bargain
And weve got to get ourselves
Back to the garden"
--- Joni Mitchell

Brian
2010-11-11


NicholasG
Orion is watching the albatross with a poised arrow.
2010-11-11