A Demanding Woman

A challenge was offered
A task of love
An exposure of self.
You accepted.

With staggering ease and grace
The vessel was filled
With images of beauty
And song.

However,
Unlike athletes of Olympus
You're not allowed to rest
On your laurels.




Poetry by Nancy Sikora
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Written on 2011-01-06 at 08:05

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Better a woman that demands love than one who is coy and wheedling.
2011-01-12


jenks The PoetBay support member heart!
well if we cant expect the undemanded what's the world coming to?
clever indeed nancy!
2011-01-10


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
What? Commitment? Well done, Nancy.
2011-01-07


Rob Graber
To be truly romantic, the human male must not rest, no matter how weary; settling into a predictable routine in which the significant other feels taken for granted is ANATHEMA to romance! From this standpoint, to be a real woman is to be demanding indeed, no?
2011-01-06


NicholasG
The natural athlete makes it look so easy! I suppose that is the difference between loving what you do, and loving laurels.
Fine writing Nancy
2011-01-06


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Momentarily impressive? yes.
Sustainably loving... only time will tell. That is the risk.

I love your succinctness and clarity in this.

Great job!

Joe
2011-01-06


John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
Solid and powerfully meaningfull. Thankyou for sharing.

Regards,
John.
2011-01-06