Not good at counting syllables - so if it's all wrong please tell. lol


Tear Drop


Tear drop surrenders
soft thoughts of another day
snowflake - melts away


© Rik - 15/03/2006



Haiku by Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-03-16 at 18:11

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Mr.Mist
Whoa..this was deep..in so few lines..think ill bookmark this one..

- Mr.M
2006-03-19


Mr.Mist
Whoa..this was deep..in so few lines..think ill bookmark this one..

- Mr.M
2006-03-19


Mr.Mist
Whoa..this was deep..in so few lines..think ill bookmark this one..

- Mr.M
2006-03-19


Troll
Oh my. That's really, really good !!!

Sort of grab-you-by-the-hair-and-make-you-gawk. Really, really..... well done.
2006-03-17



yes, I see the tears start melting away, along with the icicles :)
2006-03-16


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
brilliant haihu rik and you gor the emotions correct
know a bit about snowflakes
2006-03-16