who knows the trouble they see :)



Well

You must not dance me to darkness
Unless I am inert.
What do you care?

Shy shy...

I will talk of books and so
All words will matter to me.





Poetry by jenks The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2011-07-15 at 02:09

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Phill
to quote one of my favorite movies, "politicians use lies to hide the truth, while artists use them to tell it."

you have written truth, and thus there is a story to be discerned behind these short and adroit lines.

thanks for the post! looking forward to reading more from you.
2011-07-15


Hans Bump
This one hits the target , Jenks. Cryptic and wonderfully you. The synergy of words, form, rhythm, intellect and emotion, have merged into a sublime piece of poetry. Like coal becomes a diamond.
When you're "on" this is it.
Fondly, Hans
2011-07-15