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Losing You Baby

You cannot live within me
My body tells us so
And you must be taken
Away from me.

I feel you pulsing
In the wrong place
And wish you and I
Could move away
From here.

Surgeons must cut
Us but will never remove
You from me.





Poetry by jenks The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2011-09-25 at 00:15

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Farés
this poem is amazing! I feel like u wrote it for me when ofcourse u didnt but its great! 5/5 :)
2012-01-17


countryfog
Profoundly sad and moving, tragic loss and yet love is born of it.
2011-09-25


Hans Bump
Sharing you feelings so intimately and with raw emotion is a gift you given to all of us who read this piece.
I doubt your intent was to be inspirational but I am inspired by the courage and poetic artistry it took to write this.
It is beautiful.
Be well, Hans
2011-09-25