the young have little hope and all my wishes


That Bit

Hope you young ones
Learn greed is not good.
Aim well enough to live.

Avoid that bit
That says greed
Will get you more.

Let content fly.



Poetry by jenks The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2012-04-13 at 02:43

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Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
If you live your life the way that you write your poetry, no amount of austerity can harm you. You took seven little lines and made a fine poem of them. You do it all of the time.
2012-04-14


Rob Graber
Well said!
2012-04-13


John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
This could be an awakening for some people, perhaps. A poem of advice. Thankyou for sharing this gem. *applaud*

Regards,
John.
2012-04-13


John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
This could be an awakening for some people, perhaps. A poem of advice. Thankyou for sharing this gem. *applaud*

Regards,
John.
2012-04-13



Good advice for both young and old.
2012-04-13