Two haikus and a derivative form


Love

Lightning strikes electric
Body awakened, buzzing
Burned image fades away

The body electric
Purest exhilaration
Seldom felt again

A clay jar is weak
Shatters at the slightest blow
And must be rebuilt
Either stronger or weaker
A clay jar resides within



Haiku by grizzedram
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Written on 2013-03-14 at 04:50

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Very nicely written. The second one rings true to me.
2013-03-14