soul love

Lightning strikes electric
body awakened buzzing
burned image fades away

The body electric
Purest exhilaration
Seldom felt again

A clay jar is weak
shatters at the slightest blow
and must be rebuilt
either stronger or weaker
a clay jar resides within




Poetry by grizzedram
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Written on 2013-05-05 at 01:35

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I may be way off, but I'm seeing a dream that we don't want to leave behind as we crawl out of bed. But hope remains, as the dream still dwells within. (?)
2013-05-06


StillHoppin The PoetBay support member heart!
The middle stanza is exceptional. Altogether, this is an electrical read. :)
2013-05-05