Coffee Dream


Sleepy waters stir
Cup of coffee in a dream
Feel the tides turn home



Haiku by Chaucer Whethers
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Written on 2013-05-12 at 11:10

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coffee + red bull + vodka = party in a cup. tastes funny, feels funnier, grants user the ability to see sounds....
2013-05-13



Hmm, I can't put my finger on it, but there's something so cozy about this one. The reader is sort of invited to feel the warmth of the cup in hand, the steam rising up... But at the same time, it's a cup of caffeine introduced while dreaming, the turning back to reality. Well, this one definitely made me think. Well done!
2013-05-13


StillHoppin The PoetBay support member heart!
Substitute Red Bull for coffee, and we'll talk. ;)
2013-05-12