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Aspect* One



Divine aspects grace
Celestial choirs singing
Embrace notes all, one



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Written on 2013-05-25 at 04:21

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Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
I'm not very good on haiku's but I enjoyed this as I do the form as well, I just can't condense myself and make it look good, which you can so well!

Elle
2013-05-26



I'm finding the commenting difficult here. I'm amazed with this beautiful haiku. From personal interpretation and memories to the importance of the asterisk and punctuation, my mind moves through thoughts of the notes in one song, the many voices in one choir, the petals of one flower, and the beautiful something beneath it all that connects...
2013-05-25