This is not as was being asked fore. From the words recommended, up in my mind came this work.


THE ECLIPSE ( RIME CHALINGE) (ER MY TAKE ON IT)

The eclipse at noon , moon replaces sun hiding seems
Experience a boon to a bore of a day
Birds , confused , so out of tune somewhat
None of life more confuse when not knowing whats occurring
So not understanding confusion rules the day
Soon it will pass the strange yet normal event
Normality, will prevail , evenhandedly , eventually

Ken D Williams

The Dyslexic Wordsmith



Poetry by ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Read 1076 times
Written on 2015-03-07 at 10:30

dott Save as a bookmark (requires login)
dott Write a comment (requires login)
dott Send as email (requires login)
dott Print text


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Good one, Ken!
2015-03-08


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
:))) There you go! :D You rebel you:D! Your rhyme scheme is called off-centered rhyme"a rhyme scheme characterized by placing rhyming words or syllables in unexpected places in a given line" wikipedia;)

and that is so true, a deep thought:) "understanding confusion rules the day"

Also: "Soon it will pass the strange yet normal event" :) indeed although chaos is the absolute order of things it can feel like chaos - out of order :)))

Thank you for sharing!
2015-03-07