thank you nsw for the challenge

 




8 + 1 challenge

 

 

i’ve been so sad, some of none

is all i’ve had, sleeping past noon

growing misty-eyed as our salty tune

comes to mind, too often, too soon

 

for you our splintering has been a boon

a burst piñata, a festival, but i want more

more nights beneath our passion moon

to love, to hold, ah . . . i’ve become a bore

 

forgive me, it's hard, going back to one

 





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Written on 2015-03-08 at 13:47

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LacyxDevine
I love reading this poem, yes plural because I had to read it a few times so that I can, hopefully, learn a new way for me to experiment with my own rhymes.
2022-02-03



Your poems are so soft as if you were speaking directly to the reader's heart. This is so beautiful and flowing and you lived up to the challenge perfectly.
Loved this.
~Ashe
2015-03-08