Failed Pass Haiku

Made a pass too soon—
Now the ball is in your court
And you're not playing




Poetry by Nancy Sikora
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Written on 2015-10-31 at 14:47

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Excellent Nancy .... yes it says everything and leaves room for more:)
2015-10-31


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Normally, I don't like haiku, but this one tells an entire story. Well done.
2015-10-31


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Brilliant!
2015-10-31


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
Bashō would smile at this passing shot (so I imagine).
2015-10-31