Closet Fantasy

Do you have the faintest idea

About how I feel about you,

What I want to do?

I want to pull you into the utility closet,

Weaken our knees

In a heady rush

Until you realize

That you deserve pleasure,

Intimacy and love—

And I do, too.





Poetry by Nancy Sikora
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Written on 2016-01-21 at 12:28

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Chaucer Whethers
Said in best Rocky Horror Picture Show Dr. Frank N. Furter voice.
"Oh you naughty girl."
2016-01-22



Maybe its just me, but, the suggestion of a utility room, seems to me that the desire for this person is now so overwhelming that the act itself is a service, a utility that you simply cant do without. So, to use a perfunctory room, is apt, to me!
2016-01-22


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Whew! It's a little warm in here. This is a really nice poem.
2016-01-22


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
Beats a photocopier - I was reminded of that scene in fatal attraction with Michael Douglas and Glen Close :-)

Elle x
2016-01-21


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Nice. I hope they do :)
2016-01-21



I love it. You have expressed a very serious concern with truth and humor. Sorry OTP, but those who refuse the pleasure of intimacy require extreme measures. Idyllic places and pretty beaches don't work on those extreme cases.:)
Ashe
2016-01-21


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
goodness. i thought, why a utility closet? if you're going to have a fantasy, go for the deserted, south seas beach. But that's just me.

loved it. go for it.
2016-01-21



Goodness. But you said it out loud. I like that it's a utility closet. That made me laugh.
2016-01-21