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Ivan R

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Nights

2018-09-25
Lovely


Circumvolution

2018-08-26
"leaving four to better dreamers ..."

Think you are The dreamer, the thoughtful one ...

Such a marvelous poem ... it gave me such ease, such paus ... the wording just came to me (the reader) like waves ... I would never, ever think to rock that boat


I Hear You Sing

2018-07-02
Lovely, lovely, lovely. Such a marvelous poem*


Of Sweden

2018-05-21
What a beautiful poem, it just amazes the reader, (me ;).
This is what good poetry is about; it makes the reader feel joy from words. Amazing. Just great.


Sweetheart

2018-04-07
Poetry


RIM- Research in Motion

2018-04-07
This one has a vibe that is great


Muse

2018-03-13
Beautiful*


Screaming Under Water

2018-03-13
You have written about this experience before, but not in this dramatic form,
it is almost like a movie, like "Jaws" ... hugely horrifying experience, not one I would ever like to face ... glad, so glad, so happy, that you made it out alive*


Nowhere

2018-03-13
It sounds a bit like a rock and roll-band: The band U2" used to say the same thing: "We go from place to place, country to country, but it all looks the same to us".

Is that the same feeling you are trying to cvonvay in this poem?

Let me ask you this then: do you think that the Pope thinks the same?
He travels and all countries to him are all new and exiting and great.

Hugs. Interesting lyrics


A few things you left behind you'll never miss

2017-09-21
With all the mysteries in this poem, it still paints a clear picture: someone is missed, and the author misses that person. But however it is meant, it is a beautiful poem. Well done Ashe*


Star Man

2017-08-26
Romance in such great prose, thank you.


Reincarnation?

2017-08-26
Such a charming poem, a delight!


Inside A Hospital Room

2017-08-26
My God, these words, so full of life and pain and colour and hope, so damn beautiful all of it! You are writing tremendous poetry here, and I am in awe. Wow. Beauty and pain, weeping and fresh air ... again, wow Ashe. Bravo.


A Little While More

2017-07-31
I hope you can too*


A Journey Of The Heart

2017-06-22
Love the title; it captures exactly the poems soul and also it's message. A journey towards a strong, healthy love.


A star in heaven.

2017-06-04
So tender.


Broken Dreams

2017-06-04
Breaks my heart to read this.


Today's Thoughts

2017-06-04
So honest, so naked, a plea that comes from the gut. A great read. Thank you for posting.


My Favourite Poets

2017-06-04
Not only interesting thoughts, the poem itself has much melody and beauty


GFU #4

2017-05-12
Sad, beautiful tones of melancholy.


Dark Moves.

2017-05-12
Dense. Great


Gulls

2017-05-11
I like this, it has a great punch to it, and I also agree; replication must not equal wisdom. It should only be celebrated in songs, like when the Beatles say :
yeah, yeah, yeah.


No one is here

2017-05-11
Such beautiful poetry. Quiet, soothing sounds, pictures, emotions so delicate and moving. I love this.


In our tenth year

2017-05-11
A brilliant tale drenched in marvelous prose . But these wonderful, sad descriptions of love once lived scare me and I do not want to take 'em as truth, having just recently fallen deeply in love and thus can not see this ever happening to us. Or will this poem ring true to me ten years from now? If I still have her then, then I will sing this poignant and beautiful poem of yours to her and have her smile again.


Life

2017-05-11
Superb poetry, pure life in this. Amazing.


I Still Love You

2017-05-07
Beautiful


Fountain Pens

2017-04-30
The tone of it, the prose, the overall feel of the poem; superb.
Love this one.


My all

2017-04-28
This is so good. Its dense, it has a great story and a beautiful lethargy that is fascinating to follow, great poem indeed.


Fear of Death

2017-04-23
So heartfelt, so true and deep; it is strange to think of vanishing when all is set up to enjoy, or at least experience. To die is such a thing of mystery but you took it, shook it and made it confess its true colors; in a poem so beautiful I think it scared death away for a long, long time. Great.


Spiritual amputation

2017-04-05
I must agree. To be forced out of ones country hurts deep. I know this, being forced to flee with my parents at the age of 8 from a dictatorship, I was robbed of my fate. Strong poem.


At ease with self

2017-04-05
Knowing nothing about sailing, this poem still took me on a voyage that was much enjoyed.


Nonsense

2017-04-05
I feel it! ;)


Jump

2017-04-05
Beautiful! This washed my insides with so much beauty, a marvelous feeling it was to read this poem.


Does anybody here feel my pain?

2017-04-05
Great text. I felt it.


Breathless

2017-03-25
Beautiful


Cheryl

2017-03-09
A gem. Heartfelt.


Knocked about

2017-03-09
Honest. It is always a good thing.


I wish to build myself a house

2017-02-27
Such a nice air to it, the words fly light, wondering,

the tone is so fine, I really like this


The tree drifts

2017-02-26
Marvelous. How it goes from deep, esoteric forests;

to this dimension, and water, and life, now ...

amazing piece.


Attraction

2017-02-26
A hell of a story, had me grasping for air!


A-wandering

2017-02-09
Pure joy to read! And to experience that world, thank you for showing it so beautifully!

I am happy, happy you made me, a world you opened,
and with prose superb; excellent!


After All Has Been Broken

2017-02-03
This to me sounds like a mature love, strong and wise. Great.


Love Letters Never Sent

2017-01-18
Amazing read. Its so beautifully written.The stories are fascinating. Great write


In Retrospect...

2017-01-18
Great write, great thoughts and feelings shared on something as important as what you portray.


In a Poetry Reading

2017-01-18
Interesting, yes ... big feelings, big things happening ... great thoughts. Yes


I am the difference

2017-01-18
Interesting


Masquerade of Love

2017-01-18
So sad it is to want so much, to feel so much, to be so little in this complex lot of life when one wants so much.
Great thoughts, great words, great life in your strife in these things that occupy our minds and hearts ... this life, ah?


Speechless

2017-01-18
As a story, complete. Joyful, great to read, to feel


chains

2017-01-18
Though this is knowledge, the way you say it, portray it, makes so much sense, it should be taught at schools, how you say it, makes perfect sense


A Human Failure

2017-01-18
Yes! You are so right in this, to be human ...