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Ivan R

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Fear of Death

2017-04-23
So heartfelt, so true and deep; it is strange to think of vanishing when all is set up to enjoy, or at least experience. To die is such a thing of mystery but you took it, shook it and made it confess its true colors; in a poem so beautiful I think it scared death away for a long, long time. Great.


Spiritual amputation

2017-04-05
I must agree. To be forced out of ones country hurts deep. I know this, being forced to flee with my parents at the age of 8 from a dictatorship, I was robbed of my fate. Strong poem.


At ease with self

2017-04-05
Knowing nothing about sailing, this poem still took me on a voyage that was much enjoyed.


Crank

2017-04-05
I like these thoughts


Nonsense

2017-04-05
I feel it! ;)


Jump

2017-04-05
Beautiful! This washed my insides with so much beauty, a marvelous feeling it was to read this poem.


Window Watching

2017-04-05
Quite a gem!


Big Boom

2017-04-05
Such a marvelous poem


Does anybody here feel my pain?

2017-04-05
Great text. I felt it.


Breathless

2017-03-25
Beautiful


Cheryl

2017-03-09
A gem. Heartfelt.


Knocked about

2017-03-09
Honest. It is always a good thing.


Gently Sways

2017-03-09
Fabulous! :)


I wish to build myself a house

2017-02-27
Such a nice air to it, the words fly light, wondering,

the tone is so fine, I really like this


The tree drifts

2017-02-26
Marvelous. How it goes from deep, esoteric forests;

to this dimension, and water, and life, now ...

amazing piece.


Attraction

2017-02-26
A hell of a story, had me grasping for air!


A-wandering

2017-02-09
Pure joy to read! And to experience that world, thank you for showing it so beautifully!

I am happy, happy you made me, a world you opened,
and with prose superb; excellent!


After All Has Been Broken

2017-02-03
This to me sounds like a mature love, strong and wise. Great.


Love Letters Never Sent

2017-01-18
Amazing read. Its so beautifully written.The stories are fascinating. Great write


In Retrospect...

2017-01-18
Great write, great thoughts and feelings shared on something as important as what you portray.


In a Poetry Reading

2017-01-18
Interesting, yes ... big feelings, big things happening ... great thoughts. Yes


I am the difference

2017-01-18
Interesting


Yield

2017-01-18
This is confusing, but captivating, strong write, going here to there and nowhere, but still making a hell of a write that is worth following .. and liking. Wow.


robots, my friends

2017-01-18
Dont go as far as thinking to create ... only to reproduce is the human capable of


Masquerade of Love

2017-01-18
So sad it is to want so much, to feel so much, to be so little in this complex lot of life when one wants so much.
Great thoughts, great words, great life in your strife in these things that occupy our minds and hearts ... this life, ah?


Speechless

2017-01-18
As a story, complete. Joyful, great to read, to feel


chains

2017-01-18
Though this is knowledge, the way you say it, portray it, makes so much sense, it should be taught at schools, how you say it, makes perfect sense


A Human Failure

2017-01-18
Yes! You are so right in this, to be human ...


Ding

2017-01-18
Hell of a thing to write, good and exiting


Fighting like you never could

2017-01-13
Unsettling, yet powerful


At a loss

2017-01-13
To not know, is truly a hell of its own, yes


~~~Twisted Sculpture ~~~

2017-01-13
Life as it is. Just nailed it. In poetic frame of thought, in poetic waves ... just great


THE EARTH's SEASONS CHANGEING!

2017-01-13
Hear, hear!


World Today

2017-01-13
Great thoughts ... sad, yes ... difficult to understand, very much so, yes ... I like your words, your thoughts, your feelings in this poem, wish that the leaders of this world could ask themselves these same questions you ponder ...


My Aotearoa

2017-01-13
The pictures come one after the other, many, coming, passing and new come ahead; still, the tone is the same, laconic, almost waiting for something to happen that never does ... this is a wonderful poem, beautiful, strong and bleak at the same time ...

A great read, a great write, a remarkable scenery that goes on and on and i never want to stop seeing.


Pop

2017-01-12
I like this, so much energy emanating from it, I got energized reading it, yeah!


By another name

2017-01-10
Twists and turns and beauty in the midst of dark, greatness emerges


The fragrance of life

2017-01-10
Beautiful


A Poem

2017-01-10
According to people that say they know about outer space and our place in the worlds in outer space, we are the otters of the universe, in the sense that we are a race of playful beings ... as we play with words like these, I say we are just that, yes


AS I WALK (a work inprogress)

2017-01-10
Beautiful


THE ADVANTAGES OF WRITING! (completed)

2017-01-10
You write well, you speak out, you say that which is important, greatly done you wordsmith!


The Maharani of Kathmandu

2017-01-10
A delightful read. Though it ultimately kept itself to itself, meaning, it never challenged the reader, it did keep the reader enthralled, and thus, is a very fine write to read, good writing, sophisticated, enjoyable to the teeth!


vices & virtues

2017-01-10
Decadence, even if slow, it it coming ... this text is scary in its futuristic doom


I Remember

2016-09-16
In its sad, doomed ways, t is beauty that triumphs in this tale so deep, so dense with emotion .... what a beautiful, powerful epic.


glue

2016-08-24
Welcome back old friend! You have us thinking again with your poetry. Well done.
Ashe


Death Doulas

2016-08-24
This is such a good poem about such an original idea. What a wonderful way of living by making sure someone always has someone by their side at the last moment giving
reassurances of a life worthwhile and well lived. This is simply a beautiful poem, eloquently written.
Ashe


Poem

2016-08-24
This is so beautiful. A complete poem from beginning to end.
Enjoyed very much reading this.
Ashe


Panama's Picture Show

2016-07-25
Simply beautiful.


Filofax

2016-06-06
Honest, nervous, sweaty poetry, like something one wants to wash off, turn off, tune out, this story is so well told and honest to the bone ... great words are this honest. Beautifully human


Ramblings 296

2016-06-06
Great advice, truth told in a calm and sensible way, with warnings, but also with warmth ... what a great story to give and tell
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