Kitchen Frenzy

While the cook was busy at the stove
The rest of dinner sat looking miffed at the table
Where was the feast they'd been promised?

The ham looked hungrily at the croissant-
Just a bite? Soon they were wrapped
Around each other like pigs in a blanket

How dare you! The rest of the food
looked appalled but cream cheese was sneaking
Glances at mashed potatoes, sizing him up

Without warning he dived, losing himself
in the creamy goodness. At this,
Roast beef summoned the gravy

And the bread-
We shall have Beef Manhattan!
There was an outcry from the turnips

But the pudding was not listening
It poured itself over the graham crackers
In greedy lust

While the macaroni and cheese
Just wanted macaroni and cheese-

Barbaric delight

Poetry by Commentally Ill
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Written on 2005-10-09 at 18:05

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Hehe... like it!
Applause and bookmark...

Excellent write....amazingly creative, a delectable feast of poetic sustenance to consume and savor.


gastronomique! i feel quite full. (that's not how you spell maraconi, is it?)

hehe--a very good write!

Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
Hi CI, thought your pom was delicious, and I loved the finale - barbaric delight.
love'n'some , esti
2005-10-11 Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
lol you are too precious, you know that :) a lively dinner with attitude, id say hehe ;) you should see the huge smile on my face right now... thanks :-*


Well, I got to tell you man! You crazy or what? Love your imagination...full of intuition! Keep it up. Thanks for making me smile today!

chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
food glorious food, coughs 'cos i don't know the rest of the words to that song, someone must of ate them. damn, i am dieting too, now i want to shove some lettuce down my greggory peck, gorge myself on a carrot or maybe even live dangerously and eat a whole box of water cress :o

you're delicious! This one comes right away in my favourites list!

In a word brilliant this brought me a grin that will last all day what imagination.