a writing exercise. perhaps i should have started with a writing stretch.

get the keys

some fucked up sensation
a thought
wholly recognized as foreign

is it crazy? to believe this? does
it matter when you do?
and if true? real or fiction
it's the same

one is mad,
the other will drive you there.

Poetry by Commentally Ill
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Written on 2014-03-04 at 05:35

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Ivan R
Like the feeling of the poem, it has a fever in it, the good kind, killing the germs.

The last two lines are awesome!

I recommend a long stretch and throw away the key, seriously though, final two lines, excellent.

Make me laugh!