The frogs are Croaking

The frogs are croaking
It is a funny thing, it is just ironic
a frog..

I am trying to think of you
trying to let emotions become
words as images of you run
through my mind.

I've tried thinking of an open field
so that if you were there I'd find you
without a moment lost.

But I hear the frogs croaking. It is so ironic
they come with the rain. The rain that so
often tortures me and makes me think of you.

I used to love the rain.
I think I still do
But I dont think of it much
I rather think

Of you...




Poetry by MASTER J
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Written on 2005-10-13 at 00:51

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Zoya Zaidi
Yah! Moods colour our perception (I have said that in my intro to my poem:'Misty Valley'), The same Rain you love to get drenched into, seems wet and cold in a ble mood-you almost hate it!!! Nice 'Mood Piece' (((hugs)))
2005-10-14


MASTER J
sorry one of those insomnia days, makes me type all wrong.
Thanx for comments
2005-10-13


penfold18
I quite like this, its a pity the couple of spelling mistakes broke my consentration but its still good though
2005-10-13


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
croacking - croaking
no need for the elipses in first line (...)
its - it's
eronic - ironic
you use a capital i in places and a small case i in other places too.

a nice piece, needs some editing though. never really thought of frogs and love going together beyond that kissing a frog and it turns into a prince thing lol, unique.
2005-10-13