| Recycled Air
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2010-02-17
nicely wirtten poem. sometimes it is too wordy but the finish is is of exceptional quality both for its words and content
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| The extraordinary in the ordinary
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2010-02-12
wonderful theme and outstanding choice of words. In awe
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| You, Me and the Rain
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2010-02-12
beautifully written. The way you end your stanzas is magical. Maybe review the start of the poem, cannot pinpoint it but the choice of words or perhaps grammar feels unnatural. Other than that I really enjoyed this poem
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| Sailing
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2009-10-29
beautiful rhythm, last line is so nice
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| unvisible
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2009-10-27
fantastic choice of words. this poem leaves tastes sounds and colour. Very interesting. Very painful.
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| To Tear Down a Wall
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2009-10-27
I really like this poem, its simplicity contains great thought.
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| when she walks
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2009-10-27
truly beautiful work. so rich in contrast, i find myself reading it over and over again
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| What I mean
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2009-08-20
This is beautiful. Soem lines are a bit to "wordy" but your descriptions are heartbreakingly marvellous.
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| Whats Happened To My Country
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2009-07-31
a wellwritten and passionate read. praise
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| empty/crystalline
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2009-07-24
your choice of words takes my breath away. Terrific piece!
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| Colours
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2009-06-20
remarkable. makes me pause and think. intrigued by your diction.
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| Holding you...
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2009-06-15
such a beautiful piece. the human heart is capable of so much loving, it is lovely when we are reminded of this.
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| Rwanda's Rue
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2009-05-22
painful. emotional. very well written
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| After 12 Midnight
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2009-05-21
Im timbling through this poem. somtimes it jsut words and sometimes wow. hen i can hear the rain and touch the soul of the writes. intrigueing
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| Ooh-la-la Limerick
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2009-05-20
AMAZING
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| In condition of none.
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2009-04-23
very interesting. excellent rhythm.
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| A Carousel Parade
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2009-04-23
im amazed how well you combine excellent diction with perfect rhythm. this poem tastes like english summer..
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| Mortal and Pester
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2009-03-30
O my, this is amazing!! you leave me breathless. you're words, the beauty!
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| Eclipse
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2009-03-30
simply beautiful. written with so much talent.
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| She Was Lightening, Then She Was Sunshine
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2009-03-07
This is amazing. esp the title is breathtaking. spectacular imagery.
I strongly dislike the use of the word "sadly" really feel out of place when there are so many more beautiful word in the english language that would enrich the stanza.
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| Angel Mannequin
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2009-03-05
this poem is genuinely different. im going to have to read this again. very very interesting.
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| in spring
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2009-03-04
this poem is so beautiful. the words flow so softly and leave emotions with the reader
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| The kids are screaming...
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2009-03-04
very very interesting read. I hope your daughter comes out wise.
you capture the moment in brilliant language.
thank you
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| Who Counts a Woman's Tears
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2009-02-25
This is beautiful. Good rhythm and although the poem feels "uneven" in its choice of words it's theme is breathtaking
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| Variation in black
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2009-02-23
very beautiful wording. good structure
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| Sound of hate, touch of cold (fibonacci - challenge)
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2009-02-23
painful poem. good utilisation of the structure. good rhythm
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| she was never a queen
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2009-02-22
very well written poem with stunning imagery.
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| IT RAINED THAT SUMMER
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2009-02-22
oooo this is very interesting. perfectly condensed and brilliant tone.
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| For Elisa
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2009-02-22
this poem has such a brilliant wording. excellent use of rhythm.
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| Mr. Ivories
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2009-02-22
your choice of words in immaculate. brilliant descriptions.
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| Doodle
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2009-02-22
very interesting. effective structure and nice rhytm
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| The Butterfly Effect
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2009-02-20
your poem makes me smile. thank you.
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| CRUSH OF MY HEART
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2009-02-20
this is very beautiful. wow
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| Visit at The Hawthorn House
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2009-02-12
very emotional text and very well written.
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| she never / he never (a valentine-challenge reflection)
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2009-02-12
your rhythm is perfection. excellent piece of writing
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| Numbers
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2009-01-22
Your poem makes me smile, and think again, read it again. Brilliant.
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| hushed sonnet to the prostitute (I)
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2009-01-22
Sometimes this poem becomes a bit to "wordy", the sentences a bit too long. However especially the beginning holds such amazing diction, the contrasts in the imagery is breathtaking.
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| For Granted!
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2008-12-18
The beauty here! Brilliant.
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| The Feeling
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2008-12-18
Your poem certainly has an amazing feeling to it. Starting every line with capital letters I don't like however, ruins the flow.
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| Culinary of Excellence (Acrostic)
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2008-12-17
would be a lot better if there wasn't a capital letter at the start of every line. it really distracts me. the wording is beautiful and the ending surprisingly dark
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| Quiet so . . . quiet
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2008-12-07
Får mig att le. ser hela scenariot så tydligt framför mig.
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| nemesis with silver eyes
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2008-12-06
You imagery is unbelievable. Fabulously written. wow
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| Downpatrick Head
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2008-11-28
So beautiful. Your words paint an unforgettable picture.
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| i still love you
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2008-02-26
Such beautiful flow to it. The diction appears limited but it is saved by a brilliant strikin alst line.
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| Dangerous Delights (tanka)
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2008-02-25
amazing use of diction
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| STRANGE WEATHER FOR WINTER IN THE ISLE THANET!
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2008-02-24
the style is unique and the feeling the text leaves brilliant. thank you
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| Seascape
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2007-02-19
your dictions flows amazingly.. the rhythm is brilliant and your rhymes are well developed.
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| Tolerance
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2007-02-13
beautiful expression, well done
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| The last Kiss by M.A.Meddings
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2007-02-11
the utilisation of the structure in this leaves me breathless.. It is brilliant and you capture so much emotions in these few lines
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| Haiku for pampas grass
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2007-02-11
would love to write a decent comment but sadly.. wow.. is the only thing i can think of
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