| Sometimes I feel I am the Rain
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2008-11-09
I am proud you have written such matured poem. it is clasical
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| Love, longing and loneliness
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2008-10-11
Another lovely love poem i read of you; flawless language, fowing like a river.
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| America The Beautiful (Words by Katharine Lee Bates)
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2008-09-23
America is proud of having you as her daughter. Wild thoughts and wide discription
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| villanelle.
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2008-09-23
I glued to each word of your poem when i read. beautifully written and beautifully emoted.
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| Dust
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2008-09-19
T he poem tells you are a skillful writer. well expressed
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| Valerie
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2008-09-19
Very lucid writing, sweet to read, good sense of using words.
some correction suggested:
to reveal
to the crowd
wounded
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| Life Cycle Haiku
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2008-09-12
A wonderful thought expressed in wonderful style
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| Your Love Makes Me Whole (Valentine Special)
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2008-09-10
It's better to love and lose
Then never to love at all;'
A wonderful line.
'It is better to be born and die
than never to be born at all'
I turned a youth when i read the poem.
you may read mine, A woman fortyplus aspires other woman related poems and pass on your views
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| The Circle of Love
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2008-09-10
Your poem Love excited and aroused. A delicate subject is delicately presented. It reveals the power of your thouhts.
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| THE FIRST LOVE LETTER
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2008-09-03
A teen age emotion is well emitted. Shanmugam. May i know more about you?
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| Two lonely hearts daydream (scene two musical)
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2008-09-02
Stimulating, exciting and arousing.
'Under the covers I would dream I hold you in my arms' Whoelse can write like this. Shanmugam
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| Burning heart
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2008-09-02
You have a beautiful sensual imagination, as much as you look. I realy love your poems. Can you read my ' a forty plus woman aspires' Shanmugam
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| I rejoin myself to her~ A contribution to Zoya and Alienas Earth element challenge
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2008-09-02
Amazing! In so tender an age, you vision and perception are afar.
A very touching poem. Shanmugam
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| In Sickness And In Health
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2008-08-23
You have eloberated well the subject taken. Godd
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| Talked To Death
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2008-08-20
You ae a very good poet in true sense. The poem was well rhimed. The style of expression is good The poem reflects your genious. Shanmugam
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| THE WORST OF TIMES CAN BE THE BEST OF TIMES
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2008-08-20
This is the lesson everyone reads and understands but never pracises it. Yet it wortrh writing and you have done well. Thank you for your comments on my poem
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| And This Is The Man
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2008-08-08
Very serious and deeply touching. yes, hit not where it hurts most. Shanmugam
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| Love Is A Tree
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2008-08-08
To compare love to seasons is a unique simili. Well penned, well rhimed. Shanmugam
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| Heart strings
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2008-07-27
Very sensitive. the poem is a pun in meanings.
I am a new entrant. you may read some of my poems.
Shanmugam
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| This Anti-Love Story
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2008-07-27
Woth reading. Care is taken to follow the rhymes. if metre is also taken care in future poems the poem will be furthe charmed. you may read some of my poems. i am a new entrants. Thank you
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| When your life is ruined...
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2008-07-27
Yes, a good advice, effectly penned
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