| You Did It
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2023-10-27
The true story was a woman who stabbed herself in the leg and blamed an ex-lover who is my gentle friend. Savage!! "the heart" was more poetic.........
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| Just Like You
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2023-09-05
Thanks a lot Eli. The search for reading material on holiday can be hit and miss!!
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| Just Like You
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2022-09-26
Thanks guys!!
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| NATIONS SPENDING BILLIONS ON SATERALIGHTS & ARMS
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2021-05-16
Money spent on space exploration drives me nuts as well! Barrack tried to rein it in and was stymied at every turn. There is an unstoppable madness involved. Don't waste your nights tossing and turning hah........
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| The Prettiest Boy In School
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2021-02-07
Thanks for the comments and support everyone. Poetbay is a great place to be.
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| The Prettiest Boy In School
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2021-02-06
Thank you Ken D
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| Boy lost
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2020-12-28
Poetry
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| The Thinker
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2020-12-25
I think he deserved double model fee to hold that torturous pose hah. Looks like something propping his heels up, but still...uncomfortable if you try and copy.
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| Paris Rue De Saint Quentin
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2020-12-15
Oh yes.......the ethereal atmosphere of our visual memories. They are crystalised and adored. They never dissolve. Treasured.
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| Genesis
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2020-12-03
Can a genesis ever be an ending? Play on meanings or beginning of new life??
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| Genesis
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2020-12-03
Sounds like a break-up!! Is it ever easy?
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| Flutter - Haiku
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2020-11-10
Nicely written. I had to cut out the syllable dashes to really feel the flow, but I get it.
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| Vacuum
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2020-11-07
Thanks Esti. I am going to add an exclamation point at the end now, as that looked right when you wrote it.
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| darkness
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2020-10-21
I have also written about the melancholy of this season change. It happens every year, but is always affecting yea......
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| WRITEING IS WHAT I DO (Slite Changes)
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2020-09-18
We have to find something to fill the gaps in the day. Words are as good as anything i think.
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| Sugar
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2020-09-02
Heh. My nerves are fine.
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| I Shifted The Van.
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2020-05-25
Thanks!!
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| T.A.D
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2020-05-24
SAD is Seasonal etc.. TAD is Trump Affected Disorder. Play on acronyms that's all.
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| How?
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2020-02-07
Guilt....That most torturous and relentless of emotions. May fade, but never leaves. Good luck.
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| T.A.D
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2020-01-10
Just a poke at politics
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| Be Joyous This Christmas Season, My Friends
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2019-12-24
Poet genius. Fan of most, but not all, of his outlook. But that's okay too.
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| Be Joyous This Christmas Season, My Friends
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2019-12-24
Poet genius. Fan of most, but not all, of his outlook. But that's okay too.
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| THE THINKER THINKS (Enspierd By nice curtains Work The Thinker)
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2019-08-17
Oh how fabulous.....we are all inspired by each other hey?
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| song bird
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2017-02-02
Lightly and softly written but deeply felt. Enjoyed this poem.
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| Oddball
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2016-12-14
aw......alone on the wire......that says so much about the ones that get skittled hey? Like the surviving lizard partner, and mother kangaroo who makes it over the road, but junior doesn't. No harmony between metal and nature in this instance.
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| The Gift of Life and Death - Short story
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2016-12-14
Brilliant piece of writing Eli!!
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| Fair Trade?
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2015-01-24
Great writing...a tale....a mood....and a great finale. So, do you consign that book to the thrift shop? Or will you,again having forgotten, bring it out on another comfy chair day, to be surprised anew.
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| WOW! You're Growing up
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2012-05-07
Our own children. Such darling things. No matter what he does in the future, just tell him he's great. Can't go wrong!! Have fun.
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| Drawbridges Are All That
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2012-01-15
Exactly, Jenks. Thanks.
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| Beauty in Anything
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2009-07-11
Really good. A great observation on the wonder of children, and their ability to be fascinated with anything. Well spotted, and well composed.
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| Tree I thank you
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2009-07-11
Love trees. Don't really appreciate the line about the heavenly father , given it has god connotations and being a total non believer, but all the other sentiment I get exactly. "This is your life too." I like that especially.
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