| breathless
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2023-09-28
Beautiful - there are no tears spilled for those deemed unworthy.
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| solitude
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2015-05-03
Solitude is its own price paid... Thought-provoking.. Almost chilling..
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| amazing grace
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2015-03-29
Simply fascinating.. they way you write.. i'm inspired.. it's like a dream.. one weaves into another into another and yet this makes sense.. sometimes, the best writings are the ones that make you close your eyes and think hard..
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| Under the stars.
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2015-03-28
This is so romantic.. in such a pure, simple way.. it was a delight to read! simplicity is sometimes so under-rated
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| AS THE CANDLE BURNS DOWN
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2013-01-27
I love how visual the first part was.. and how simple the flow of words were.. and yet so deep and real..
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| You name it.
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2012-04-20
I know this feeling.. too well.. I find the simplest poems to be the best ones..
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| End is nigh.
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2012-04-19
very poignant.. and great imagery.. i really like this..
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| Like a moon.
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2011-05-20
Your words can conjure images in a readers mind so effectively.. An art difficult to master I would think..
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| Run away blues.
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2011-05-20
This is beautiful.. How do you write so well? Makes me think about my past... not pretty thoughts.. : )
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| Rivulet of crystal.
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2011-05-12
I read this many times and the potency was never diminished...
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| When the Heavens Cried
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2011-05-12
Beautiful! I could see the entire picture... you're really talented..
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| Born Free
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2011-05-12
Quite potent.. I enjoyed it from start to finish.. :)
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| Forgiveness
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2011-04-29
nicely done.. It's something I can relate to yet couldn't find the words to express it..
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| a cold wanderer
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2011-04-28
This is more than teenage and hormones can possibly fathom.. :)
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| Fading
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2011-04-28
In about 8 lines you've managed to convey beautifully what it feels like.. It's not an easy task especially when the emotions are so big.. this is fabulous..
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| The way out
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2010-06-23
beautiful!
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| Emotional rehab
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2010-06-23
a poem everyone can relate too.. brings back memories.. i like it.. :)
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