sana

2013-05-24
indeed a worth reading text :) V compact yet full of impact.

2012-09-17
beautiful piece of well woven emotions ! Reminded of my such comforting memories.I think this is life,it just moves on waiting for none..we willingly or unwillingly have to move on too..like life!

2012-09-17
nice write ! touched a piece of my heart :)

2012-03-20
Very positive indeed! I wish we all wear this Happy-tude everyday!!

2012-03-20
Nice Write Amy, u even made me see the wind :)

2011-03-02
I Second John's comment .We are what we are today because of our yesterday..
I will say it as a very good poem , very well expressed ,the sadness it brings touches my heart somewhere..

2011-03-02
I had a similar feeling when I saw the pic of my grand mother , she passed away during childbirth of my aunt and my mother was 2 years old then..

2011-02-23
hi :) thnx for reading.Rhine is longest river in Germany.

2011-01-25
I like that philosophical perspective of life so very well expressed through Doors !! indeed a nice write :-)

2011-01-25
I can only say 'It almost feels real' :-)
loved the last line 'Safe in poems, nothing left to conceal.'
There are so many parts of us expressed in poems where we feel safe and secure!

2011-01-21
Nice Haiku :-) u made me smile with so less of words!

2011-01-20
Made me sad too! When I donot see any light or the path seems too dark , I pray to Lord :-)
Prayers the the best gift that is given to mankind, no matter who we are or where we are , we can always pray !
Life is sometimes very hard for some people but we are always stronger to endure pain then we expect from us !!I will pray that u live your dreams :-)

2011-01-20
Nice poem.. well expressed! sometimes we all feel the same ..to break these chains of limitations and fly high.. to change the world for the better! Even though its not real somewhere such world exist in a poet's mind :-)

2011-01-18
Beauty of silence and unsaid , perfectly put into words! Thnx for sharing it with us :-)

2011-01-16
Beautifully written !

2011-01-16
Very Captivating! Nice write ...

2011-01-14
Very nice ode to your cousin :-)
We cannot see God but we can surely feel his presence and warmth with all nice people around us .

2011-01-14
A Pure Pleasure to Read :-)

2011-01-14
A nice write and beautiful thought behind it,

2011-01-14
Very truly said and nicely expressed. I feel it the same way sometimes when life is taking me to its own directions.

2010-11-08
Nice thought.I wish we could have such land in Real :-)

2010-11-01
I would say just one word Beautiful!

2010-11-01
Nicely expressed! Truly said Love remains same.

2010-10-26
Made me nostalgic.. Nice write. Thnx for posting it.

2010-10-02
Nice Write .. I enjoyed it ..Somewhere this stagnation is the evolution of a more beautiful you deep inside .. We are growing old every day but we are learning and improving every day there is someone inside all of us getting better and better day by day !!

2010-10-02
Beautifully expressed in short lines :) The quest for the other better Half of us..

2010-09-16
Spontaneous fLow of sad feelings that kept me reading till the end!.
Perfect ending.
The people who donot value true love donot deserve us!!

2010-09-08
sad to read that . May Allah give u peace and patience.
TK
Sana

2010-08-14
Nice thoughts shared . thnx for posting it.

2010-08-13
very well written with thoughts spun inside rightly.

2010-07-30
Captivating! esp the lines "will fill up my glass, and my shadow
will sit beside me and we will drink the pain"

2010-07-30
Very Expressive! I can feel it while reading every line of it.