| If I'm A Fool
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2007-12-18
theonly reason i liked it was that
im a fool too
lovely words
good luck
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| The love of my life
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2006-05-08
my god.
i know im a guy
but i loved this poem.
for my beloved i am that guy.
but she does not love me.
any way
beautifull.just beautifull.
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| Letter to God
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2006-05-08
beautiful writing.
like you had a conversation with God himself.
lovely.
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| Dirty Pretty Thing
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2006-05-06
haay
your good
let me refraze that
you amazing.
nice poem
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| Mustard Fields of Kashmir
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2006-05-04
ohhh my God
Zoya
this is amazing
i mean
i'm wiping away my tears as i write to you.
As i was reading i myself was roaming around in the yellow fields.
and yes
i have heard the gunshots.
i myself have seen the yellow turning red.
my father is a Col in the army.
i now how it is.
i just loved this poem.
amazing.
thanks for writing it.
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| How you could say that you loved me to
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2006-04-28
hayyy
nice poem
all i can say now is that
be happy
look at the bright side.
at least she was there with you.
even for a wile.
there r some who loved and never got it.
take carefully
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| waiting
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2006-04-28
hayy
welcome welcome
good poem
short yet tells you so much.
keep it up.
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| A Kenyan Expression of Love
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2006-04-22
haaay
nice poem
it may be old fasioned
but itll work now too.
ps..Safaricom can really use this poem as an advertise.
good poem.
take care
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| I Need You Today
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2006-04-09
i loved this poem as if i my self was a mother.
=)
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| My Secret
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2006-04-05
nice poem.
for your words this is not a huge world.
your words have travelled aroud this world through minds and hearts.
i really lked the end.
i wish i had the power to heal the pain of others.
i wish i could heal my own.
take care
keep up the good work.
=)
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| A dream
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2006-02-08
God
i had an exact same dream
and i had the exact same responce
i still cant forget that morning
i loved your poem
and hay
it didnt mean anything
We should enjoy every second with that special person.
=)
i have just written a poem on a dream
Do check it out
Its my latest poem
Bubye
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| Only in dreams
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2006-02-08
great poem
i am the same place where you stand
But the only difference is
i told her
She did look back
but at the same time kept on walking.
Any way
i love your poem
Talking about dreams
i have written a poem on dreams my self
please do check it out
i know u will like it.
the name of the poem is
It was just a *****
Enjoy
=)
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| ME AND YOU
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2006-02-05
Nicely said
good
keep it up
i bet there is more inside of you
take it all out
=)
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| Lay With Me My Beauty
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2006-01-25
i sware
as i read these words
tears fell of my eyes
beautifull
"i want to be chained to your heart and soul"
i realy felt these words
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| Wildfires Love
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2006-01-25
waoo
my god
this is a good poem
its not just a poem
its love
i saw my self in this poem
i am in the same situation
i stand where u stand
hope u like my poems too
Hope is all we have
take care
keep up
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| The one I Love
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2005-12-23
this really is a must read text
Excelent poem
Bravo
there was so much deapth in the poem
nicely written
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| Love's Journey
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2005-12-09
bravo
reading this poem somehow gave me comfert
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from Pakistan 