| INSIDE MY HEAD!
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2017-05-10
Bravo Poet! 末))
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| Sadder Than Anything
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2017-05-06
Yes, a dark stormy day creates sad,
very sad imagery within itself.
Thank you, One Trick Pony 末))
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| Sadder Than Anything
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2017-05-05
I'm honored, Ashe, thank you!
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And thank you Ken!
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| NOTE TO A SIBLING!
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2017-05-04
Spot on wisdom from The Dyslexic Wordsmith:
"I'm sure you will have better things to do
than waste half an hour, as my remains, my cadaver, is disposed of!"
Bravo Poet! 末))
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| GFU #4
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2017-05-04
A powerful love-lament.
Bravo Poet! 末))
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| every bowl has its stone
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2017-05-04
Love the way in which this is expressed.
Bravo Poet! 末))
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| Language
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2017-04-27
Yes, I agree.
Thank you, Ashe! 末))
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| Language
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2017-04-26
Thank you Bibek and Ken 末))
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| HE WAS BORN TO BE OLD
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2017-04-26
"He was born to age before his time
born to listen, and that aged him"
末 a unique opening.
Bravo Poet! 末))
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| F R A U D ..?
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2017-04-25
I'm trying to
remember
the reasons
yet
I'm feeling betrayed
because memory
is genius
a timeless witness
that collapses the facts
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| a lie
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2017-04-25
Our hearts are a mere moment
of love.
Sometimes it's better to lie,
sometimes it's important to suffer,
other times a restless heart
will take what it can.
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| t h e - I N V I S I B L E - a l p h a b e t
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2017-04-25
What lies
"between the lines...."
are
so many interpretations
lifting from imagination
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| what is - NOTHING?
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2017-04-25
Nothing is what we put
our entire lives into.
Unfortunately, or fortunately,
nothing matters.
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| LIFE ON A BICYCLE! (WITH MUCH THANKS TO A DAH SUGGETGEAN)
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2017-04-24
Yes, life as a bike
tight spokes, loose spokes,
broken spokes and all.
Bravo Poet! 末))
P.S. In the first line, maybe "be"
wants to be after "can", or maybe not.
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| Poetry
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2017-04-24
A lovely and surreal take
on the art of poetry.
Bravo Poet! 末))
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| Reflection
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2017-04-23
The easiness in flow and rhythm
makes this piece near-music, such a
lyrical verse.
I love the abstract configurations added
to this poem, like: "Suitably Colour my thoughts".
The promise to reflect somebody
is a rich journey.
Bravo Poet! 末))
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| Every Crushing Step
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2017-04-23
Lovely imagery throughout
tied perfectly together with a
solid ending.
Bravo Poet!
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| northern light
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2017-04-22
I love the easy feeling of nature
and desire in this piece; the surreal
imagery is like a quiet drawing
that gathers my imagination
Bravo Poet!
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