| In the Sun
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2006-07-31
Thank you for your comments. I appreciate them.
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| My Final Plea
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2006-07-18
One point made. The poet is the poet. I like your guts, Amanda. No scrutiny. A great poet, indeed.
Nice.
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| Lovely Girl
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2006-06-26
This is so exceptional, charming, splendid, explicit and evocative. I loved this from the beginning.
But then, babe, watch it before you slip into love. You write so well.
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| Good Morning (Owu ro Olo jo)
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2006-06-25
KJC, I think you should unblock me now. Or never! LOL
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| Good Morning (Owu ro Olo jo)
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2006-06-25
Well KJC, thanks for your comment. Mom, how do you do?
Thanks
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| Pelzer.
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2006-06-23
Well, welcome buddy. Check my blog. I have written something about you. Thanks
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| Heavenly Scrolls: In Memory of Mattie J.T. Stepanek.
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2006-06-23
Well, we have cried together with her Mom and I am trying not to cry any more, since we know Mattie lived a fulfilled life, no matter that he died at 13. Sure, this is a great poem and the only that I can count on that would make Mattie happy forever.
Shas, may the Almighty God bless you for taking part in this project to keep Mattie's memory alive.
I will rate this poem 50.
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| When the Spinster Mocks the Bachelor
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2006-06-20
I will come back to it to critique it. Thanks.
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| When the Spinster Mocks the Bachelor
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2006-06-20
I loved this, Mom. The thrills that come from it.
I love you.
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| Men and Geckos
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2006-06-19
Then I should make my own critique on this. Mom, there is too much of this 'romance' and 'seduction' alluding here. Do you want to convey to us a more refined texture of beauty and arrogance, appalled to the reels of the poem.
Anyway, keep it up.
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| Men and Geckos
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2006-06-19
Nooo---I can't judge my mom harshly. I wanted to know your views---lol--
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| Men and Geckos
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2006-06-19
Woah woah Mom! You didn't tell me you were joining this group? Oho! Ok then---if thats what will make you happy, welcome and have your seat--lol---
I can't comment on your poem though, let others do.
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| Hoping she didn't came back
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2006-06-18
The title of the poem is a flop, but the story line is deeply constructed. Thanks for the nice poem.
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| Reflections Of What Should Be
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2006-06-16
"I live a life that etches as crystal" As the most annoying book reviewer to people so far, I can't (or couldn't even) figure out any problem with this poem.
I have been suffused by its simplicity. I loved it so much. Thanks for this great write.
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| Uncle's Game
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2006-06-16
This is touching. You used the word 'gay' Yes,I know it doesn't apply to sexuality, but to happiness. Can you please enlighten me more about this poem.
Was that a rape?
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| Deep inside we all know...
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2006-06-16
Rhetoric! It would be. This is explicit and wonderful.
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| Everythings' Gonna Be Alright.......
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2006-06-15
Actually, I haven't seen this poet here before. Lol...I will go through the poem and give a genuin comment as I wish it should be done...
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| WHY I AM LEAVING POETBAY
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2006-06-15
KJC, can I have your number then---or you can visit my blog (http:/onyekanwelue.blogspot.com) and make your critique---thanks
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| WHY I AM LEAVING POETBAY
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2006-06-15
Thanks to you all.
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| Chronic Depression (Acrostic)
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2006-06-15
Thanks Kathy. I have manic-depression---and this poem is relative to my illness. Thanks for sharing it with me----
I love you.
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| Aung San Suu Kyi
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2006-06-12
Welcome to the bay my sweet poet. I loved your works....
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| Who Fucked This Mountain
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2006-06-12
Thank you so much for your comments...
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| Scenes From A Plantation
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2006-06-12
Thank you so much Kathy. Though, you might have a different view of what you have written, but to me, it is relieving.
Shas got the right way to describe it, and it is this abrupt colonisation that has destroyed my own country...and to me, I feel that colonisation is racism and the feel for superiority, which has done lots of harm to us...
Your convictions are pure and you are one of the best poets I have ever read. Thank you so much, and I think you should find time and visit my blog, to see some of the articles that I have written lately about this colonisation and racism stuff.
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| Rainfall
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2006-06-11
Tears of God or urine of God? Lol...
Anyway, this poem is so beautiful...
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| why i'll never know
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2006-06-11
You have described someone in this bay....but I will say no name...this is sooooooooooooooo beautiful....
the sytle is fresh and original....
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| cool
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2006-06-11
Soooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!
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| Love
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2006-06-11
I think it should belong to the young...I love this...love in the tender age is the most lasting...I loved this...
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| Somewhere...
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2006-06-10
Thank you all again for your comments...
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| Somewhere...
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2006-06-10
Thanks all...
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| Quiet Talk
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2006-05-31
You know what, Alex? You should not be in this bay...you are really one fantastic poet I have ever seen...
Keep up the wonderful writing.
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| Now...
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2006-05-31
Marjan, you take me by surprise. Upon the fact that you are taking exams, you still come back to comment on my poems...lol
Much love from the mystical kid...lol
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| First Kiss by M.A.Meddings
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2006-05-31
Always...always....always...I mean always beautiful and long as the name is....
I have fallen in love with your poems...lol
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| I missed you KJC
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2006-05-31
Hmm...Zay...I never meant being angry or what, but I was jealous...lol...
Much love,
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| Now...
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2006-05-31
I know that if I ever start replying one and one to all my friends on Poetbay, I will be expected to finish that in at least 20 days...but then, I am happy that you all care about me.
Thanks and I love you all.
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| I missed you KJC
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2006-05-31
Are you a manic-depressive like me? I guess you don't know how to make friends. How could you have written these names without putting mine? Lol
''Who am I?'' That is the question.
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| Burning City Sunset
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2006-05-28
I don't know why writers born between 1986-89 are dazzling and powerful. This is mesmerizing and I guess not only in Nigeria that these crimes occur...
Boo-hoo!
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| A sacrifice of old
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2006-05-28
He would know what you mean, Dan. Chris is a genius...
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| The lost and the winning
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2006-05-28
Powerful and splendid!
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| A sacrifice of old
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2006-05-28
Wow! Dazzling and fantastic...could be another Seamus Heaney....
I loooooved thisssssssssssssss....
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| Your Smile
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2006-05-27
Your smile, somewhat perfect
Your laughter, sweetly made
Your giggle, God-made...
and a beatiful poem, written here...lol
I loved this....
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| the answer is... Love
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2006-05-27
This is so beautiful and tantalising...
I loved it.
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| L'amour de la chanson I Ã chanter
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2006-05-26
Merci tellement.
Cher KJC, J'essaye de jouer sur des mots. C'est français, si vous ne vous occupez pas.
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| A Boogaloo Beast Bash!
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2006-05-25
Yeah...alliteration, toppled with lullaby...
Nice poem indeed!
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| Au-dessus des montagnes (Above the Mountains-French Version)
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2006-05-25
Merci tellement du commentaire ma poésie. I valeur vos commentaires tellement et moi attendons avec intérêt de lire certains de vos travaux également.
Merci et je t'aime tous.
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| Anything...but God!
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2006-05-24
I have read this earlier...still it is preachy...
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| PRISONER
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2006-05-24
I loved this, but there is too much of this hectic grammar that makes it somewhat to a Minus poetry first time reader.
Nice.
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| Traitor!
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2006-05-24
But Judas was never a betrayer...lol
Nice text.
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| MANGO 70
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2006-05-24
Somewhat complex, but enjoyable. I loved this.
Dear Chocolate African brother, welcome to Poetbay...lol
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| Religiously I will sink
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2006-05-24
This is extreme and beautiful...
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| Spicy Gossip
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2006-05-22
Fantastical and sweet!
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