| Take Heart!
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2010-05-05
It's been years since I've been on, but Zoya you never cease to amaze me. Ian
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| Notions Concerning Limbs
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2008-07-19
got the love the slow self affliction truly genius
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| THE HUMAN EXISTENCE
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2006-12-25
i like your complex beautiful write reminds me of somethings i written (not all on the bay) I believe in the New Writers' Movement a system of writing to inform without too much sugar coating. Very good form
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| Guess What It Is? One
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2006-12-22
Lets see... in my mind Violence never sleeps up at anytime of day,
Murder is 80% about seriousness
Made for Peace but made to fight symbolizes to me that gun could either you to attack, or attack the attacker.
Slice of light is the muzzle flash of a gun
Gun forms were origanily formed crudly from zinc and crude metals, and we know the complexities of high powered riffles nowwaddays. The bullet bares no grudge. Now with the color description.
green is the infection of gunshot run
and red is the blood extraction (of course)
I think a lot outside the box, so what it about
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| The Feather
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2006-12-22
a beautiful write, metaphorically perfect
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| Guess What It Is? One
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2006-12-22
i was thinkin' a gun but i may be wrong
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| Snake Of May
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2006-12-21
nice writeI feel compelled by this write, either have entirely too much in common or nothing at all. Great write
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| Savage
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2006-12-21
a beautiful write you see, thats something I shouldva wrote :P
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| Sonnet 87 In Memoriam to a Dead Sister
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2006-12-10
romantically tragic, Sorry to hear, life gives you shots like that
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| Lies
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2006-11-03
I loved it, its like one of those writtens I wish I thoguht of keep it up
Welcome to the Bay!
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| Your Eyes
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2006-09-26
beautiful write as usual. So when are you gonna publish a book?
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| 209. The pathetic lover
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2006-09-20
great work as usual!
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| das Lied von der Hure (the Whore's Song)
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2006-09-17
people overlook the nature of this poem due to vulgar words, but if you're open-minded, you'll see this is wel put, a sad introspective of a sociopathic prostitue.
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| Daddy
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2006-09-07
Hey cat, thats deep, thats th direction my poems are headed (not the ones posted on the bay). Im glad you see the social misjustice, Neglected blindsided government agencies, rather than seek financial or mental help, confine them to cages. great write.
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| 72. Confessional
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2006-08-27
beautiful work. You my friend, are a work of art, if you were to publish i would purchase your book gladly
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| Fondue--A Limerick!
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2006-08-24
nice lol whats up with you and limmericks now?
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| Who told you to stop laughing?
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2006-08-12
wow, This is like one of favorite modern day poem. thats right, the big brand companies consumes this country, kinda like a theme of my book.
A banker is tougher than a lawyer because they already owns you financially,
While a lawyer can only talk you into selling yourself, for pay of course.
Smart keep up the good work.
Bookmarked.
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| Sociophobia- Fear of society or people in general.
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2006-08-11
I love this one too wow I think I found someone like me in mind
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| Zemmiphobia- Fear of the great mole rat.
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2006-08-11
pretty damn good i must say, manipulating a phobia, is a cash crop in narrative writting. great work
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| Where the sun no longer rule
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2006-08-10
deep, I loved it, its kinda like one of those poems: "Why didn't I think of that" I commend you sweetness.
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| The Glass House
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2006-08-10
Fret not beauty, your metaphor skills are indeed alive! :D
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| Pelzer II.
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2006-08-08
im loving it, this is real deep
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| Light at the End of the Tunnel!
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2006-08-07
My stars! How beautiful. I know life is not all dark personally, however, my life is about dejection unfortunately, however a clever antagonist as myself, admire this Work! Beautiful May your words grace poetry evermore.
Wolf
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| You
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2006-08-07
Now this is deep, I prety much love it!
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| You
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2006-08-07
Now this is deep, I prety much love it!
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| Chronic Depression (Acrostic)
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2006-07-29
I love your work, since I been on the site your a beautiful person inside and out. keep up with the good work
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| Nothing Lasts Forever
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2006-07-10
Wow this poem is deeper than what it shows through words pure genius
"But really, nothing lasts forever
especially not when you're so young
Sleep, dear baby, and may you never
die before your song's been sung:"
I like this poem I would change die to perish personally. Other than that I think its very beautiful.
Welcome home
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| Light at the End of the Tunnel!
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2006-07-08
I also think that its ironic, Due to the factI view life is worthless at times and manage to still like this submission
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| Light at the End of the Tunnel!
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2006-07-08
beautiful done, no need to draw out any other words.
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| Panacea
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2006-06-30
very thought provoking, reminds me alot like my style of introspetive thought i commend your method
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| my funeral
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2006-06-29
thats pretty deep Im digging this poem. It hits me at the opening line when You say, "My funeral, I will be there, thats a promise." Now thats what I wish I've wrote. I comend you thorugh it all.
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| Why arn't people born with wings?
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2006-06-24
quite lovely
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| Boy in the Hammock
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2006-06-24
Wow thats deep scenary. I must say you are indeed beggining to be one of my favorite poets, for a poet is not an chance given, its a chance taken.
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