| Forevermore (A Petrarchan Sonnet)
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2007-06-16
This isn't fair! I do my best to sneer at love poems, because 99% of them are crud. You are at the top of the 1% that are fine at writing them.
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| Pearlized
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2007-06-16
This has me floating. Superb imagery and metaphor. First class work.
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| Just Look At You Now by M.A.Meddings
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2007-06-09
'Raw feminine beauty'
Thanks. I'll use that line when I get my next delivery of viagra.
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| Life is Never the Same
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2006-12-28
Love it! Nothing else to say. Ok I'll just say it again. LOVE IT!
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| The Feather
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2006-12-28
Oh you pulled one out of the hat here. Lovely work with classic potential.
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| The Heart of Poetry
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2006-12-28
Yep! this is bookmarked for me too. Great stuff.
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| I Met A Man In Siguedo Today
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2006-12-10
Love it. Nice bit of fun.
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| Sonnet 5 (The Second Deluge)
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2006-12-04
Those Frost giantssaid they'd be back. Thomas I shot from the hip, and asked Thomas Perdue something I have been wanting to ask you. That bloody clerk? I was wondering if you had any particular figure in mind? It's not a problem if you want to keep it a secret, it adds to the mystery. it may even be better if we all have our own candidates for the role. I think your clerk poems would make a good book some day.
Take care
dave.
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| Just a brave face
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2006-12-03
A good write. The first words that come to mind are "get used to it kid" We are compelled to wear a series of masks on this stage world just to survive. It's what is inside that counts.
Dave.
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| Innocence
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2006-12-03
Yep!. You put many of my feelings into words, very stylishly.
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| Floodgates
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2006-12-03
I like this. It drifts along, nice and easy.
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| Floodgates
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2006-12-03
I like this. It drifts along.
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| The life of a clerk
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2006-11-28
'emotional forensics' Absolutely ingenious line in another fine piece.
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| Hands
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2006-11-26
I'm off to bed now. I stayed at the computor in hopes of finding a really good poem before I turned in. I found a brilliant one. It even mentions me.. the freckly little red head with too much intuition. It rocks and rolls and tumbles and flows. the imagery is fantastic the structure is perfect. I am heartened and inspired, so I'm off to sleep now.
Thanks.
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| The Clerk
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2006-11-25
Wickedly clever. you really have the measure of that Clerk.
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| The Voice of Humanity
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2006-11-25
Great ideas and values only use humanity as channels. They have their own immortality. Superb.
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| there has been bad poems since my last confession
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2006-11-25
Now this is fun. Thanks.
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| It's a painful joy
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2006-11-25
There is no pain in the joy of reading this excellent poem. The flood of well constructed images is incredible. Great work.
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| Poetic Posturing
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2006-11-25
Yep.
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| Effects Of Past Moments
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2006-11-25
Totally in accord with KJC. The style is really effective and the content is deep without being overdone.
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| Come On And Break My Heart Again a mexican poem. Author unknown
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2006-11-20
Yes I heard this. A brit station featured it as record of the week or something a while back. great tune too.
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| Until you come home
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2006-11-20
Great read. Love the way you have fun with words.
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| Mythica
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2006-11-20
Phenomenal imagery. Wonderfully imaginative and well expressed.
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| Fairy Tale night dreaming
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2006-11-18
Tell me. Wonderful poem.
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| his opiate touch
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2006-11-18
Whistling slowly. Brilliant to me.
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| Kauai Hawaii
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2006-11-18
The tourist board should employ you. I'm booking my flight. Gorgeous work.
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| Split Dimensions
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2006-11-18
Phew!. Now this I identify with. Maybe we all do.
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| What will I find in your heart?
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2006-11-18
Really enjoyable clever rhymeing.
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| LABYRINTH BED
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2006-11-18
Oh yeah!. Real power and emotion. First class.
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| Hay for Van Gogh
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2006-11-13
Vey enjoyable. Bubbling with insightful imagery. How many horses in Constable's 'Hay Wain'? Can't figure.
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| Echoes of Echoes
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2006-11-13
Oh yeah!. I love powerful expression in poetry. Give it some kid!
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| Delicate Romance
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2006-11-07
Fantastically filthy. Great write. Superb.
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| All at sea
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2006-11-02
Gutsy and 'feeling' rich. Excellent piece.
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| A Road to Many Ways
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2006-11-02
There are shades of Pablo Neruda's style in your work. Hey not a bad poet to be compared to!
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| Get On Through
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2006-11-02
Excellent imagery. Lovely bouncy work. Very enjoyable for such a deep poem.
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| conker tree
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2006-10-29
Worrying isn't it?. Nice poem.
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| Ruins of Konarak (poetic erotica carved in stone)
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2006-10-29
Wow Zoya. I was right there with you reading this. Thanks
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| Flaming Heck
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2006-10-29
Fucking Hell! Fantastic imagry.
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| moving on
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2006-10-29
There's a lot of poetic class here. deep without being overdone. Great read.
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| This Anti-Love Story
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2006-10-29
I think this is a courageous and quite brilliant piece of work.
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| Twilight of Love
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2006-10-13
Hatefully perfect. You know what I mean of course. It's a great poem.
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| The Wisp Of Dark Hair by M.A.Meddings
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2006-10-13
Yep! .. but with a nic like yours it had to be good. nothing less would do. Love it.
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| Vices
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2006-10-13
I love the way it runs and hums.
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| The Atheist Manifest
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2006-10-13
I'm sold. A fantastic revel.
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| The Marionette
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2006-10-05
You'll be fine. Just string along for the moment. Nice poem.
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| 15) Death is the only occasion
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2006-09-15
Simply correct. Keep it up.. we may get through some day. needs to be said and said.
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| What did God say?
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2006-09-15
somebody must have said 'Let there be gravity'..I suppose.
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| Dear Barry John by M.A.Meddings
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2006-09-15
I love this but I'm very biased. I was at college in Wales in the 70's. I'm English and I played hooker. I fear nothing now.
Strains of the 'Pontypool front row' echoing in my ears. W B Beaumont was the answer to all my fucking prayers. Great poem. Thanks for the memories.
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| She's an Artist
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2006-09-15
Oh man! Images images images. Great stuff. Very enjoyab;e read.
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| Drifting Woodsmoke
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2006-09-04
Wonderful. The imagry and emotions really come to life here.
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