| Apparition II
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2025-04-06
Échec et Matt
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| Apparition I
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2025-04-06
I thought you were dead
but I am and you, you are dead too
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| Options
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2025-04-06
it is not a pleasant news actually, you have all my support...it's never a good news to hear to use a figure of style
wish you are strong enough to handle it!!!!
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| Go Figure
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2025-04-05
you get alway overrun by your sadness in a way, no time to complain..
sadness is related to weakness don't you think?
pain is something else, we don't handle the same amount of pain
sadness isnt' it more about emotional feelings when pain is more physical ?
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| Where I A From
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2025-04-05
I was struck by your history and the final decision
but also, your title that made me ponder
Where I A from, I don't know if you made this mistake on purpose
I am less and less I AM and more and more IA
it looks like you depicted an authentic American life, tough and rough no places for complaining
thank you
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| Patting the Horse's Nose
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2025-04-05
Thank you, my friend! A cowboy's life isn't very common anymore, yet it's so American—part of that enduring American spirit... You seem genuinely concerned about things we don’t see in cowboy movies, things of our time...
—A faithful reader
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| Please Keep Calm
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2025-04-04
une chose horrible l'administration, surtout quand on tombe sur des fonctionnaires zélés qui ne vous lâchent pas !
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| War, you said
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2025-04-04
War seems to be the ultimate, inescapable word.
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| Unfortunately
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2025-04-03
sun is good for health, I think it is one of the first medicines
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| Constant
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2025-04-02
même si tu perdais la raison, est-ce que la douleur disparaîtrait avec elle?
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| Misery
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2025-04-01
dear Lawrence, I have put your poem to get some feedbacks from deepseek
this is only a small fragment of its comment
Your poem *Misery* is a striking meditation on suffering, power, and the ambiguity of divine justice. The speaker contrasts two kinds of narratives—earthly malevolence and religious ecstasy—both of which seem to stem from a world governed by cruelty, whether infernal or divine. The poem’s skepticism toward traditional moral binaries (God vs. Satan, good vs. evil) gives it a provocative, almost blasphemous edge.
soon, how will we recognize a human comment from an AI one?
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| Rules are for Losers
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2025-04-01
rules, laws, orders...Casino, Jugdes and militaries
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| Cynicus To W. Shakespeare
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2025-03-31
I love short verset
because there is so much to ponder
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