I this is another that speaks for itself.


Pointing Out

Thanks for pointing out
That I don’t have a life
It seems my soul just died
The day I lost my wife
So I’m sitting here waiting
To follow where she’s gone
And I was really right on track
Until you came a long
And pointied out
I don’t have a life.















Copyright©2023 Peter Williams




Poetry by peter williams
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Written on 2023-05-24 at 10:29

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Alan J Ripley The PoetBay support member heart!
We all feel a little lost when we lose someone,
It takes time to grieve, take care of yourself
At this saddest of time's.
Regards Alan.
2023-06-04


arquious The PoetBay support member heart!
In the grieving other's witness a whole new form of living almost not-existing. Well expressed absence from one 'left behind.'
2023-05-27