I Penned this one after a friend of mine send me a poem 'Longing in Sorrow' she had written and asked if I could give my opinion, so I replied with my opinion on what I could see in the verses and I would work on her creation 'Longing in Sorow'
was as clear as day
Not clouded in torture
And total dismay
How I long for your love
proved that it’s true
As everything I touch
Am I really feeling you?
Please look in my heart
Through my anger and pain
You should know who I am
And not just my name
For you wouldn’t be here
If it wasn’t meant to be
So look In my heart
And tell me what you see
I know I’ve been bitter
I know I’ve been cold
I beg you understand me
by accepting my soul
As I sit here in my sorrow
Struggling to get by
While pleading and praying
That you’ll be by my side
Do you remember grey clouds hide
something you cannot see?
It’s a forever clear blue sky
Which is where I long to be.
So help me rise above my storm
Holding my clammy hand
Just wrap your arms around me
As we follow fate as it is planned.
Copyright©PeterWilliams/KerryMorrison2023
Poetry by peter williams
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Written on 2023-09-25 at 11:48
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Fate as planned
I wish your lovewas as clear as day
Not clouded in torture
And total dismay
How I long for your love
proved that it’s true
As everything I touch
Am I really feeling you?
Please look in my heart
Through my anger and pain
You should know who I am
And not just my name
For you wouldn’t be here
If it wasn’t meant to be
So look In my heart
And tell me what you see
I know I’ve been bitter
I know I’ve been cold
I beg you understand me
by accepting my soul
As I sit here in my sorrow
Struggling to get by
While pleading and praying
That you’ll be by my side
Do you remember grey clouds hide
something you cannot see?
It’s a forever clear blue sky
Which is where I long to be.
So help me rise above my storm
Holding my clammy hand
Just wrap your arms around me
As we follow fate as it is planned.
Copyright©PeterWilliams/KerryMorrison2023
Poetry by peter williams
Read 126 times
Written on 2023-09-25 at 11:48
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