A Tanka poem, with the 5-7-5-7-7 syllable pattern.
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The Widow

The dying moments
became easily confused
with the ticking clock;
while in a jar next her bed
she stored the tears that she'd shed.


© D G Moody 2024




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Written on 2024-08-01 at 17:33

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2024-08-26


alarian The PoetBay support member heart!
The sleeping widow
2024-08-02


Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
Very skillful. Your dedication to writing is to be commended, Dougie. B&L Allen
2024-08-02


Sameen The PoetBay support member heart!
Poignantly captured, man. Amazing
2024-08-02