Your Heart

 

- writing exercise of sorts... writing in rhymes isn't something I find particularly easy... 

 

 

Somewhere along the way

You lost your heart for it

But you decided you'd stay

Even if we'd be worse for it

 

It's hard to piece it all together

Pulling bits closer you realize

But by then, it comes to falter

And a remedy won't materialize

 

So you try hard to find a solution

And hope no one takes a peek

If they found out your deception

You'd onward be seen as weak

 

If not completely ineffectual in

Your important role around here

Tell us, what will it take to pin

Your heart back to this sphere?

 





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Written on 2024-10-07 at 22:23

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shells
Impressive, good you gave yourself a challenge, it paid off.
2024-10-08


Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
writing in rhymes isn't something I find particularly easy... Join the club!! Personally I find it is rarely easy, but then at other times it just flows like water. This reads like the latter instance. Well done.
Blessings, Allen
2024-10-08


arquious The PoetBay support member heart!
Now there at last the heart spoken bare
for some a morsel to others, grand fare!
2024-10-08


Liam The PoetBay support member heart!
You cracked it! well done.

Liam
2024-10-07


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
You've done well.
2024-10-07