28 Feb ( last day blues )

Life is
Where morphine
If available
Would be useless
A raw spring
Oozing pain
Bristling alive










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Written on 2025-03-01 at 03:06

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IB M The PoetBay support member heart!
The last three lines call to mind a strong sense of misery, but the whole gives weight to deep darkness and hopelessness. It makes one hope the person is ok. Very impactful impression this leaves, I like the images you give for my mind to ponder on the moment you're presenting. Thanks.
2025-03-02


Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
The birthday of Mars may be something to celebrate, but the demise of the month of purification has been too swift. Only 28 days, but they have passed like the blinking of an eye for me. And on the last day the world was given sight of what to avoid - at all costs.
Blessings, Allen
2025-03-01