This is the second of a series of poems I am in the process of creating using curious metaphors for experiences.




LIFE... IS A BOX OF BITS

 

 

When my box was almost full
I could only see the pieces on the top.
Some were straight, some were bent,
Some were happy, some so very sad.
They held such temptation to touch
That I searched first for happiness
And picked up the happiest piece.
I held it to my chest, up close, so
Close that I could feel it's laughter
And the thumping beat of it's heart.
In the rapture of joyous bliss
I reached blindly for another piece
And found it magically slotted in -
But this was the saddest piece
Which caused my tears to flow.
So, missing mirth and plenty, I
Urgently reached inside the box again,
And again, and again, and every time
The piece I found fitted like a dream -
Incongruous shapes that connected
So well, so miraculously well.
Thus I experienced them all
One after the magical before
And when my box was empty
I closed my eyes, sighed, remembered
The beauty of it all
And died.

 

© Griffonner 2024

 

 

 

 





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Written on 2025-04-09 at 09:12

Tags Life  Experiences  Fulfillment 

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IB M The PoetBay support member heart!
Gives the impression the moment was somewhat overwhelming, going through a wide array of intensities and significance. Seems to me like what the last moments of life must be like for most circumstances. Well, this is where your words sent my thoughts, anyway... I found it very interesting, thank you.
2025-04-09


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Interesting.
2025-04-09